Dear Bob,How are you these day

作文題目

假設你是李華，你的英國作家Bob將于9月在你所在城市的建新華文學校學習漢語。請在學校附近給他找一套房子。請根據圖片提供的信息寫信介紹房屋情況，并告知房屋面積25平方米，月租500元。

注意：

1.詞數：100左右：

2.參考詞：租金—Tent(n.). 

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours, Li Hua

滿分理由

這篇文章格式正確，意思表達完整，寫作流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，并使用了“以”which，引導的非限定性定語從句，使文章層次分明，充滿變化，不愧為考場的佳作。 

Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Yours, Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，內容完整，表達清晰，連接緊密流暢，時態語態使用準確，特別是最后一段的適度發揮，不僅豐富了內容，而且符合邏輯，成為本文不同的亮點。 

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分理由

本文具有很強的內在邏輯性，從遠到近。從外到內，層次分明，散落有致。同時，讓步狀語從句運用得恰到好處，非常精彩，結構完整，從問候開始到結束都非常完整。 

Dear Bob,

I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.

You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內容具體、詳細、適當，表達非常有創造力和創新性，長短句并用，語言結構充滿變化，分散、流暢、圓潤，特別是情感動詞和分詞的使用非常獨特，為文章增添了很多色彩。 

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month. 精品小說推薦： 昔日落魄少年被逐出家族，福禍相依得神秘老者相助，從此人生路上一片青雲！ 我行我瀟灑，彰顯我性格！ 彆罵小爺拽，媳婦多了用車載！ 妹紙一聲好歐巴，轉手就是摸摸大！ “不要嘛！” 完整內容請點擊辣手仙醫

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