高中入學考試優秀作文欣賞評論(1)

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高考優秀作文欣賞點評之一(一)

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請使用Good Health為題寫了一篇文章。

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GoodHealth

The desire for good health is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as well as a successful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live comfortably or work effectively.

How to keep healthy, then? First, enough time should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Second you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.

As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.

[名師點評]

本文層次清晰，邏輯清晰。第一段是關于身體的重要性，第二段是關于保持健康的各種方法，第三段是關于保持健康的。“我”而言，“我”如何加強體育鍛煉。本文語言地道，有許多亮點，如：First… second… Finally…三個詞分三種方法；The desire for, …is universal, Especially nowadays, the possession of, is regarded by nearly everyone as…, Only… can we expect to….How to…then? As for me, I have always been taking care to… so, I can…等等，這些短語的運用使文章錯落有致，豐富多彩。

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